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Are Books Your Crack?

As a former librarian, if there’s one thing I love, it’s books. But, about a month ago, a friend of mine asked how I found time to write with so many updates on Goodreads. “Yeah…about that,” I began, and what followed was an epiphany. My bookshelves were overflowing, my library card was maxed out, and I wasn’t rewriting my manuscript. Could books be the problem?

No way, I thought. I had to read within my genre. I had to stay current on the marketplace. It was part of my research, as a writer, to read all the books about my craft. Everyone says that the most important thing a writer does is read. But I wasn’t writing. I was stuck in a vicious cycle of automated library holds, and the irresistible urge to review every book that passed through my hands.

There is something intoxicating about the instant gratification of reviewing. Your grammar doesn’t need to be perfect, and plenty of strangers are interested in what you have to say. In a way, I was helping people while I strengthened my social networks. Wasn’t I?

It’s called an addiction for a reason, and the steps below are what finally worked for me. If someone you know needs help (you), keep reading.

Eleven Ways to Tell if You’re Addicted

  • Your bookshelf is stuffed with unread books, and you just bought one more.
  • You have a different audiobook every day… for your car, laptop, and iPod.
  • The library clerk has to remind you, again, that you’re at your limit for check-outs.
  • You have more than 200 friends on Goodreads.com, but the local librarian is your best bud.
  • The only writing you do is book reviews.
  • People have begun to follow your reviews.
  • You’re skimming a magazine on the elliptical machine, while you’re listening to a book on tape.
  • There are more than 500 books on your to-read list.
  • Friends say they’re amazed at how many books you’ve read. Repeat: read, not written.
  • Neighbors marvel at your ability to walk the dog while reading.
  • Your family resents books.

Twelve Steps to Recovery

  • Realize that you’ll never have time to read it all. Yes, your habit may be limited to materials about writing, but we all learn more by doing. Ask yourself if what you’re doing is adding value to your long-term goals.
  • Now, this step is tricky, but vital. First, divide your reading list into categories: materials within your genre, leisure reading, research, and books on writing. Once you create the lists, decide which books are truly important to your career right now. Give yourself one day to do this.
  • Download LeechBlock.com. This Firefox add-on is designed to block time-wasting sites that prevent from you writing, e.g., Goodreads, Shelfari, weRead. It works well for Facebook too.
  • Take a week off from reading. One week. Give your mind a break, and reevaluate your goals. Ask yourself: What’s the purpose of my book? Why am I writing it? What do I want to accomplish? Then, find a writing space away from all reading materials.
  • Find a mentor or role model who is consistently producing new material, and surround yourself with serious writers.
  • Write down your long- and short-term goals, and then create deadlines. Gauging your progress can motivate and inspire you.
  • Lean on your critique group or RWA chapter for support. Discuss your goals with family and friends to keep yourself honest.
  • Once the week is over, make a vow to read less and write more. Remember, it’s not a competition. You’re retaining next to nothing with shallow reading habits.
  • Tackle your writing first, and then reward yourself with reading. You’ll remember more when your mind is uncluttered.
  • The library is your opium den. Finish the books you have checked out, and then place your returns online before you head back. Give yourself five minutes to check out.
  • Ditto for bookstores. Go in with a purpose, and stick to it.
  • Maintain. Continue to take personal inventory of your goals, and move forward. Reading is important, but it’s just the first step. You’re a writer. So, stop being too busy.

n3088641. Why did you decide to write a young adult book dealing with eating disorders?

I actually decided first to write a story about a forgotten sister.  I wanted to tell the story of a girl who felt invisible because the entire family revolved around her older, more perfect sister.  I had seen a segment on television once about families where all the focus was on a problem child and the other kids were forgotten, and I wanted to tell their story.  I decided to give Lizzie anorexia because it is afflicting girls at younger and younger ages, and I think it’s something we need to pay attention to as a society.  As a child actress, I grew up seeing actresses diet to unhealthy levels because their jobs depended on it.  I wanted to address the subject in a new way, through the eyes of a sibling.

2. What are you working on next?

I am currently finishing a YA paranormal romance (no sparkly vampires, though!) which is different for me, and I am really enjoying it.  It’s a challenge to break out of your comfort zone as a writer and try something new.

3. Please describe your introduction to the publishing world.

My first introduction to the publishing world came through SCBWI and the annual conference in Los Angeles.  As an unpublished writer, I went to the conference every single year and listened to publishers, agents and writers.  I made a number of connections there–and the conference gave me the confidence to begin submitting manuscripts to agents and publishers.  My introduction to Dutton Children’s Books came through my agent, Stacey Glick, who submitted the complete manuscript for Jane in Bloom.  I was asked to do a revision before an offer was made, and I looked at this revision as an opportunity to improve the manuscript with advice from an editor.  After the revision was complete, I received an offer from Dutton, which was really exciting!

4. Please describe your influences, inspiration, and typical day.

My daughters are a constant source of inspiration for me.  I am a single mother of two little girls, and I write stories I would be proud to have them read.  My influences change depending on the manuscript I am writing.  For Jane in Bloom, I listened to Michelle Branch, The Spirit Room, because she sounded like Jane to me.  I also went out and shot the photographs that Jane shoots in the book.  Sharing her experience made it more real for me.  Later, looking at my photos of roses in different stages of bloom influenced the work.  For the manuscript I am currently working on, I am listening to Daughtry and Kelly Clarkson.  I have also created a board with pictures of my main characters and the locations of the story, and I have it hanging near my desk.  In my typical day, I work a day job as an attorney and I am busy as a mother.  So I write when I can while driving or cooking dinner.  There are so many scraps of paper next to my computer!  I mostly write at night when my children are asleep.  I am a morning person, but I have learned that when I write at night when I am more tired, I am less critical and the work flows more seamlessly.

5. What advice would you give to aspiring authors about learning the craft? And what books, mentors, or classes have helped you the most?

One of the things that has helped me the most is to write.  By this, I mean that talking about being a writer or thinking about being a writer means nothing if you don’t write.  So the best piece of advice I can give is to write.  Even a few sentences a day forces you to work at your craft and exercise your writing muscles.  The other thing that helps me is setting a deadline for myself, even if it is artificial.  I find that writing without a goal in sight can be overwhelming.  I have read so many books on writing that have helped me, but one of my favorites is Writing Down the Bones, by Natalie Goldberg.  I would also highly recommend joining a writer’s group like SCBWI or Romance Writers of America because the mentorship and information you can gain is priceless.

Thank you so much for such wonderful questions!  I look forward to people’s thoughts and comments.  I can be reached at www.deborahlytton.com.

Thank you so much, Deborah!

Purchase: Jane in Bloom

{CDA1CC5A-40C9-41C7-9DD8-057791D62969}Img100I’m convinced that finding a critique group is harder than finding the perfect pair of jeans.

A friend (who shall remain nameless), gave me a copy of the book, The Wednesday Sisters, and said she wished she had a critique group that was as supportive as her knitting club.

Now before you roll your eyes, let me say that my friend is a serious writer. She can take criticism and dish it out. What she meant was that it’s difficult to separate dedicated writers from weekend hobbyists. Like dating, you don’t always marry the first person you meet.

I’m an active member of the Orange County Chapter of the Romance Writers of America (OCC-RWA) and the Chick Lit Writers of the World (CLW). Now that I’ve belonged to these groups for over six months, I’ve noticed that the first thing new members do is search for critique partners. Sometimes I read the e-mails from new members, and I sense their frustration. Many writers, like my friend, hear no response at all.

Joining an organization like RWA is just the first step towards finding a critique group. Getting involved with a local chapter is the next step.

One way to connect with members of your local chapter is through social networking sites, like Facebook and MySpace. Better yet, follow them on Twitter. Twitter is a great resource to learn more about someone. Just lurk for awhile. Figure out what you can offer a potential partner, and then answer any questions they have. Be helpful.

But what if your local chapter is hours away? Then try Meetup.com, or Friendster.com, which allow members to search by zip code, for everything from book clubs to critique groups.

Yes, social networking is time consuming, but so is rewriting. A critique group is like the perfect pair of jeans. You could spend your whole life searching, but once you find them, you’ll wonder how you ever lived without them.

For more advice on critique groups, visit http://julieleto.com/advice_for_writers.html.

geekgirlcoverThis list was compiled by Geri Russell for the May 2009 issue of the Romance Writers Report. More details on these first sales are available on the Romance Writers of America website, authors and books section. Please support budding authors!

Charity Tahmaseb and Darcy Vance: The Geek Girl’s Guide to Cheerleading, a young adult novel, to Simon Pulse. Their official website is: http://thegeekgirlsguide.com/wordpress/.

Eva Gordon: Werewolf Sanctuary, a paranormal, to Vanilla Hearts Publishing. *Gordon is donating proceeds from her book’s sales the first week to a wolf sanctuary. Her official website is http://www.ravenauthor.com/.

Kitty Keswick: Freaksville, a young adult paranormal, to Leap Books. Release Date: 1-8-2010. Her official website is http://kittykeswick.com/.

Linda Poitevin: A Fairy Tale for Gwyn, a contemporary romance, to The Wild Rose Press. Release Date: 1-22-2010. Her official website is http://www.lindapoitevin.com/.

Therese Walsh: The Last Will of Moira Leahy, a women’s fiction with romantic elements, to Random House. Walsh’s official website: http://theresewalsh.com/.

If you are a writer with a first sale of book-length romance fiction to a non-Subsidy, non-Vanity Publisher, please send your information to Gerri at ggrussell@juno.com or 6903 128th Place, SE, Bellevue, WA 98006.

XO,

Jillian

41XYNubiVJL._SX106_“In the shadow of loss, a wallflower blossoms…”

Description: Jane’s big sister, Lizzie, has always been the center of attention. No one ever pays attention to boring, plain Jane. But when Jane’s twelfth birthday marks the beginning of Lizzie’s final descent into a fatal eating disorder, Jane discovers that the only thing harder than living in her big sister’s shadow is living without her.

In the wake of tragedy, Jane learns to look through her camera lens and frame life differently, embracing her broken family and understanding that every girl has her season to blossom. Spare and vulnerable prose marks this beautiful debut that is at once heartbreaking and uplifting.

It seems as if 2009 has been the year of YA books dealing with eating disorders (Wintergirls, Purge, Purge: Rehab Diaries). Yet, out of this collection, Jane in Bloom blossoms. Lytton’s debut novel is told by Jane, a twelve-year-old narrator, who gives an account of her sister’s anorexia, and how it affects her family. Through Jane’s eyes, the reader feels her frustration and love for her sister throughout the novel.

My favorite thing about this story is its simplicity. I sympathized with Jane, especially when she was too embarrassed to tell her best friend what she was going through. Lytton does an excellent job of showing, instead of telling.

Example: “I can feel my temples start to sweat. My hair is so heavy; I want to shave it off right now. Be bald.”

What girl hasn’t experienced a Brittany Spears moment like this? When even her hair feels like pressure? Or in Jane’s words, “When one sibling sucks all the energy out of the family, it is the remaining sibling who suffers the most.”

Overall, Jane in Bloom is a story of love, loss, and discovery. Though it deals with heartbreaking issues, it’s also optimistic. Through all the sadness, Jane finds a way to move forward as a stronger individual. I would recommend this book to teens 10 and up, teachers, counselors, and mother-daughter book clubs. It’s a profound story that could lead to deep discussions about what’s important in life.

On a personal note, I met Deborah Lytton at a book signing on May 31st at Laguna Beach Books and she’s delightful. Be sure to visit her Web site www.deborahlytton.com to tell her what you think of her novel.

Click here to buy this book: Jane in Bloom

Question: Has anyone else read this book? What did you think?

Currently reading: Evermore (The Immortals) by Alyson Noel

If you liked Jane in Bloom, I would recommend Willow by Julia Hoban and The Earth, My Butt, and Other Big Round Things by Carolyn Mackler.

Harlequin loves young women. I'll drink to that!

Harlequin loves young women. I'll drink to that!

Big changes are happening at Harlequin.

The April issue of the Romance Writers Report announced that the publisher has launched its own Harlequin Teen imprint for young adults, between the ages of 13 and 17. Teens can visit Harlequin Teen Panel to offer input, enter contests, and chat with other romance aficionados. This is great news for contemporary YA readers and writers.

In other news, writer Dzireena Mahadzir has reported that a publishing house in Malaysia is working with Harlequin to translate and release popular titles in Bahasa (Indonesia’s official national language). KarnaDya Solutions, a three-year-old publishing house which targets the youth market, and Harlequin Enterprises have joined forces, under a brand called Red Dress Ink.

Red Dress Ink novels are targeted towards female readers, between 15 and 35 years of age, who enjoy humorous stories about young urban women struggling to discover themselves.

Chick lit is going global!

–Jillian

851Written with the warmth of Lee Smith and the magical touch of Alice Hoffman, Secret Keepers is a beguiling second novel by the acclaimed author of The Garden Angel.

1. What advice would you give to aspiring authors about learning the craft? And what books, mentors, or classes have helped you the most?

I started out writing mostly on weekends. I was a single mom for a number of those years, and I worked full time. I found that by writing five or six hours on both Saturday and Sunday, and one weekday morning or evening, I could keep a momentum going. A novel is a marathon. Someone once told me that, and it’s true. So, when people ask my advice about writing and finishing novels, I tell them I find it helpful to do a couple of things: Write regularly. Set up a schedule for yourself. Write at least three times a week for two hours or more each session. Commit to a schedule.

Also, although writers’ methodologies vary widely, I would recommend trying to write the first draft at a steady pace with a daily word count goal–1,000 words, for example. For the first draft: Don’t get up from your desk until you’ve met the word count goal. On the other hand, be kind to yourself. Even if it’s wild sentences, or you find yourself on a tangent, write your 1,000 words, and don’t judge just yet. You’ll develop a habit of writing on schedule, and you’ll at least have something to revise down the road. After four or six months, you’ll have a big, baggy monster of a first draft…and you can put it aside for a while, and then jump back in to figure out what the story is, and cut away and revise, revise, revise. Think FLOW with your first draft. Keep the portal open.

Also, with your first draft– resist the temptation to re-read and polish those opening pages. Some writers may work this way, but I think for many of us pushing through to to the end is the best way to handle a first draft. You will be resistant to changing the opening if you invest too much time and energy in it. That first chapter or two will be reading better and better, but the fact is, the opening may eventually need to be discarded or moved. Save polishing for later. You don’t need any kind of degree or MFA to write. But you do need to read a lot. Talent, luck and pluck–one editor told me that’s what writers need, and that seems a good way to describe it.

2. What are you working on next?

I’m drafting a novel that looks like it may be a prequel to The Garden Angel–about the life of the grandmother, Myrtle Ann. But I’ve got a couple of other ideas, too, so…I’m not sure what’s next. I’ll probably go out and weed the lettuce and spinach this afternoon and come up with something.

3. What authors do you read?

I’m an eclectic reader and often recommend books on my blog, Novel Thoughts. Some of my all time favorite novels–this is a very partial list: Ironweed by William Kennedy, The Bluest Eye by Toni Morrison, every novel written by Ann Tyler, The White Hotel by DM Thomas, The Hours by Michael Cunningham, The World According to Garp by John Irving, Norwood by Charles Portis, Veronica by Mary Gaitskill, Housekeeping by Marilynne Robinson, Amy and Isabel by Elizabeth Strout, Nobody’s Fool by Richard Russo, Barbara Kingsolver, and lots of classic southern faves: Jill McCorkle, Lee Smith, Allan Garganus, Josephine Humphreys, Carson McCullers, Kaye Gibbons, Eudora Welty, Michael Lee West–Crazy Ladies, love it– Fannie Flagg. On and on.

4. Please describe your introduction to the publishing world.

I worked on the draft of my first novel, The Garden Angel, for several years. My first big break– well I was blessed to have several: the first chapter of The Garden Angel won an award in my state, and was published in the Charleston newspaper. That was a clipping…my first. Enough to send in a query to an agent, which I later did. A second break– going to Breadloaf Writers Conference, where I met Julianna Baggott, whose first novel Girl Talk, was coming out, and who struck me as an immensely talented writer and generous person. When I asked her–a stranger really, then–if she were pleased with her agent, she had glowing things to say about the agency, and encouraged me to contact them, and to mention that she sent me. To make a long story short, I queried the agency, sent in my lone “clipping” and the first three chapters. Judith, who is now my agent, asked to read the entire manuscript. It wasn’t quite finished, so I sent her what I had. She liked it, and had others in the agency read it. She worked with me about a year until I finished it. She also helped me get a couple of blurbs before she sent it to editors. She sent it out to about a dozen houses, and St. Martin’s Press took it.

I think it’s important to take heart about an agent search, and realize there’s a variety of ways to land an agent. It only takes one agent to take you on, one person to fall in love with your stuff. Some writers query a long list of agents, and find someone that way; others are approached by an agent after they’ve published a piece–especially in a literary magazine. I found my agent, indirectly, through a writers’ conference.

5. Please describe your influences, inspiration, and typical day.

I write on a Mac laptop at a desk in a spare room. The window looks out on bird feeder. Sometimes, when I need to step back and get a big picture…I’ll use a flip chart and colored markers to sort of sketch the plot as it has evolved– using different colors for different characters. I’ll use index cards, too– I keep the character bios on them and notes about scenes, and then I’ll use them to keep track of scenes…what happens when. I’ll lay them out like cards, and move them around.  This is in the revision process, not the initial drafting. For the first draft, I try to keep the portal open, and write without revising or polishing. Editing comes in subsequent drafts.

Inspiration comes from reading. There’s nothing like reading a book you get lost in– that you love and admire. I try to read two books a week. Sometimes I succeed. The other major influence and inspiration is nature. I love being outside in the garden or walking my dog. It frees the mind.

Secret Keepers

By Mindy Friddle

When Dora’s old flame Jake Cary returns to Palmetto with a broken heart and a gift for gardening, the town becomes filled with mysterious, potent botanicals and memories long forgotten. Soon enough, Jake and his ragtag group of helpers begin to unearth the secrets that have divided the Hanleys for decades.

Genre: Southern Fiction
Hardcover: 256 pages

Publisher: St. Martin’s Press (April 28, 2009)
ISBN:
0312537026

Secret Keepers is available through Amazon.com, B&N.com, and any independent or chain bookstore.

At age seventy-two, Emma Hanley plans to escape small-town Palmetto, South Carolina, and travel the globe. But when her fickle husband dies in undignified circumstances, Emma finds herself juggling the needs of her adult children. Her once free-spirited daughter Dora turns to compulsive shopping and a controlling husband to forget her wayward past. Her son Bobby still lives with her, afflicted with an illness that robbed him of his childhood promise.

n1737707483_2198Hello Louisa,

Thanks for the interview. I loved “The Wait!” Your quirky punk hero was intriguing and I liked the twist at the end. It’s sexy stuff. What’s new with you?

So I gotta dish some inside information. I came to the “Rekindled Fire” anthology a bit late. I saw the call-out for submissions through the erotica group Passionate Ink (http://www.passionateink.org/) when there was two weeks left until the deadline. I had a story, “The Wait,” that fit the theme of reunited lovers perfectly.

I’ve cradled “The Wait,” like much of my writing, but have never submitted it. Maybe because I imagine it being a full-length story. Once I was satisfied that it was ready – enough – to go, I checked out the submission guidelines once again. My heart dropped. Elle Amery (http://elleamery.blogspot.com/), the anthology’s editor, had changed it to read that she had received too many related-themed stories already. Should I submit? I told my husband, and he said, “Send it anyway.”

Within a week, I had heard from Elle. “The Wait” was over. And, I have to give major kudos to Elle. She’s a fabulous and intuitive editor.

That’s great! So as a published author, what advice would you give to aspiring authors about learning the craft? And what books, mentors, or classes have helped you the most?

Focus on your work, but also nurture your craft through classes and friendships. That term “networking” is so non-personal. If you join writer’s groups and take classes, you’ll be bound to forge rich friendships with some like-minded people who understand you.

When I was on bed rest with my second child, Jenny Gardiner (http://www.jennygardiner.net/) sent me daily e-mails that kept me going and made me laugh. I only know Jen through the Chick Lit Writers Group; we’ve never met in person. She’s the perfect example of a good friend who can be met through these groups.

More than 15 years ago, I took a class with the women’s fiction author Jo-Ann Mapson (http://www.joannmapson.com/), and we’re still friends. If anyone’s been an inspirational mentor, it’s her.

It doesn’t matter that I have two master’s degrees in English and journalism; I believe in education. I continue to take classes through online workshops such as those offered through many RWA chapters and places such as UCLA extension.  Right now, I’m taking an online class with Sascha Illyvich on BDSM, and damn does he dish! (It’s also great to see into a man’s head …)

Even if you (think) you know it all, being out with others can help fuel creativity. Last year, I took a one-day workshop at UCLA on “How to Write a Sex Scene” with Jessica Barksdale Inclan (http://www.redroom.com/author/jessica-barksdale-inclan). I hadn’t read her books, and now I have. She’s a fantastic and creative writer, with quite a bit of passion. After that class, I had the confidence to submit an erotica story, which was already written, and it sold.

That’s inspiring! As a journalism professor, what did you have to learn, or unlearn, to write fiction?

Within journalism, you’re trained to write short. Space matters. In fiction, I need to remember to draw out the descriptions more, add more feelings and emotions. I also constantly fight to turn off my “internal editor,” and get the words on the page.

There’s always a quandary between journalism and fiction writing. Do you work full-time writing all day long for a living, while practicing your creativity, and then try to write at home at night? Or, take another job and save your creative juices. I’ve done both, and there’s pluses and minuses for both. For me, sometimes my hands would physically hurt after a full day and the last thing I would want to do is sit in front of a computer. Instead, I’d write short stories by hand. There’s something inspiring about doing mundane Excel sheets all day, and then having the freedom to write at night.

As a reporter, I never miss deadlines. As a writer, working without a deadline, is hard. I’ll keep re-writing. The last three fiction stories I’ve submitted have been accepted for publication. It really makes me feel like I should have let them go long ago.

Interesting. How would you advise aspiring authors seeking to get published in erotic fiction?

Be honest. Read stories in the genre. Erotica e-books are hot right now. Readers can download them quick and easy. Explore publishers such as Ravenous Romance. If you want to be published by Harlequin in their “Spice Briefs,” then you better buy and read a few. Then decide: what do you like to read? What turns you on? Are you willing to delve into some of those more private places, and share? I may not hit the bondage clubs, but recently I did buy a pair of black leather anklets, just to get the feel for them. And, you know they’ll be featured in an upcoming tale. (In fact, I bought two … one might just be for a giveaway.)

I’m not afraid to pick up Penthouse Variations to see what’s out there, and I subscribe to Playboy.

Craft-wise, try to go beyond the cliché. Sure, the most natural description of a climax may be a crashing wave, but how else can it be described?

As a reader, I relish the escape from reality that fiction offers. Personally, I’ve always found sexuality and erotica to be a very natural offshoot of humanity and writing. Hopefully, the passion within my stories touches others.

It definitely touched me! Okay, describe your introduction to the publishing world.

Fortunately, I’ve always known what I wanted to do: write. I’ve been writing since I was a child. Although then my subject-matter was poems about the feisty cat Garfield. In junior high and high school, I served on the yearbook staff, and then moved to newspaper in college and graduate school.

I started working full time as a copy editor for a magazine publishing company after college. These days, I freelance write non-fiction, as well as work on my fiction.

What’s a typical day like? Who are your influences and what’s your inspiration?

Typical day? Truthful or embellished? I have a family: I’m married with two small children. I work. Fortunately, I’ve built up my professional career where I no longer work an 8-5 job. That doesn’t mean that I don’t work. Currently, I’m teaching at three universities and I have combined 150 students. Some classes are on campus, and others are online. That’s just the tip of work.

I need to make time for my writing. Most of my fiction writing happens at night, when everyone’s asleep and the house is quiet. Often, I’ll have a glass of wine, unwind and then let the creativity flow; this technique also helps with shutting down that noisy internal editor. When I have to polish or edit my tales, I need to carve out more alert time during the day. I’m working on a few longer pieces, but right now, with time constraints, short stories are working for me.

For early influences, I fell in love with books by Stephen King and Anne Rice. Within the past few years, I’ve been reading Charlaine Harris, Kim Harrison, Annette Blair and recently I poured through the Demonica trilogy by Larissa Ione; Ione writes a wicked and erotic paranormal tale.

Inspiration comes from everywhere. Inspiration comes from life. I soak in life around me, and try to enjoy the blessings and passion within it. Then those elements get infused within the writing (without all the distractions of the everyday mundane).

I agree. This interview has inspired me! Thank you so much, Louisa.

Thank you, Jillian!

Purchase: Rekindled Fire: An Anthology of Reunited Lovers

Louisa Bacio started reading A. N. Roquelaure’s Sleeping Beauty series at an impressionable age, and has been hooked on erotica ever since. She believes that everyone should have a little love—and a lot of pleasure—in their lives. Louisa lives in Long Beach, California, with her adoring husband, two wonderful and challenging daughters, and a houseful of pets. In addition to writing, she teaches college classes in English and journalism. You can catch up with Louisa at http://louisabacio.blogspot.com/

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This is the story of Cyd Charisse, a caustic teen who’s been kicked out of boarding school, and sent back home to live with her mother and stepfather in San Francisco.

I wasn’t crazy about Cyd at first. She seemed like a brat, stomping around her parent’s home, but she grew on me. Her relationships with her surfer boyfriend Shrimp and her elderly gal pal were touching. I felt bad for her when she was grounded, and Shrimp told her they needed to take a break.

When Cyd’s mother ships her off to New York City to spend the summer with her biological dad, Cyd gets a major wakeup call. Her preppy half-sibling lisBETH isn’t happy to see her, and her father refers to her as his niece in public. Cyd’s dreams about a happy reunion are crushed, but she’s whip-smart (though anti-college), and honest about her abortion. I liked her in-your-face fashion sense and her attachment to her rag doll, Gingerbread.

Favorite Cyd-isms:

On money— “I hate it when adults revert to that topic. It’s so ugly.”

On family— “ … as we strolled, not walking close like chums, but at a slight distance from each other as, I suppose, wayward dads and their love children are wont to do.”

On pervs— “The whole flight he had been pretending not to stare at Gingerbread, who had been sitting on my black tights, right below my short skirt, during the flight.”

On justice— “I was the wrong party, not the wronged party.”

On herself— “I was a whore for popularity then …”

In closing, Cohn’s writing has a lot of style. The characters are likeable, quirky and human. I would recommend this book to any teen who liked Weetzie Bat, or the movie Juno.

Click to buy this book: Gingerbread

Question: Has anyone else read this book? What did you think?

Currently reading: The Man of My Dreams by Curtis Sittenfeld

voilet21. What advice would you give to aspiring authors about learning the craft? And what books, mentors, or classes have helped you the most?

The best thing a writer can do for herself is get qualified feedback. By this I mean having a lit professor, an editor, or other professional read your work and critique it. The only way to improve your writing is to take a few hits and come back stronger. I majored in technical writing in college, and while I do believe any writing training is beneficial, training in the kind of writing you want to do will boost your raw talent.

Books I found helpful include Beginnings, Middles & Ends by Nancy Kress, How to Write a Damn Good Novel by James N. Frey and Writing the Breakout Novel by Donald Maass.

2. What authors do you read?

Because I write children’s literature, children’s books have taken over my nightstand! Some of my favorites are A Crooked Kind of Perfect by Linda Urban, Second Fiddle: Or How to Tell a Blackbird from a Sausage by Siobhan Parkinson, The Slightly True Story of Cedar B. Hartley, who planned to live an unusual life, by Martine Murray, and A Corner of the Universe, by Ann M. Martin. I still love my grownup writers: Anne Tyler, Sue Miller, Elizabeth Buchan, Elizabeth Berg, and a host of mystery writers.

3. What are you working on next?

I’ve got two middle-grade fiction books coming out with Walker Books: The Hotel of Blueberry Goodness (2010): a girl who lives in a hotel meets an eclectic group of friends, including a teenage runaway. Me and Jack is due 2011: a twelve-year-old newcomer adopts a dog, and together they take on a bully, an unfriendly community, and the dark mountain that looms above the town.

4. Please describe your introduction to the publishing world.

I’ve been writing since I was little, but my first introduction to the business world of publishing was a conference put on by the Space Coast Writers Guild in Cocoa Beach. I was working on my first manuscript, and I’d prowl the Internet at night trying to glean information about the path to publication. One search turned up a listing of conferences, and you could choose to go to single presentations rather than the whole conference. That sounded good to me! I’d never been to a conference before, and the thought of going all day surrounded by more savvy writers scared me. But I found one presentation that was compelling enough to make me put on makeup, use hairspray, and drive to Cocoa Beach: Writing the Query Letter.

When I arrived, the other writers seemed to know each other. I didn’t know at that time there was such a thing as critique groups; I found out later a lot of the conference attendees came together with their groups. The woman who presented the query letter session was great! In a short forty-five minutes, she hammered down the mechanics of a query and the main thing it should accomplish: describing the conflict of the novel. I talked with her after the session and she offered to let me email her my query. I was impressed by her comments and generosity. It was my first view that I actually was part of a community—the writing community.

5. Please describe your influences, inspiration, and typical day.

My influences are my childhood, my family, my mom and dad, God, pets I’ve owned, feelings I’ve had; sometimes I overhear a snatch of conversation—just a phrase or two—and it ignites a whole story. I’m inspired by all those things, and I’m inspired by anyone in any line of work who pushes their gift to the limit.

My typical day begins with strong cappuccino, two of them. Make breakfast, make lunches, get everyone ready, drop little people off to assorted schools, come back, do a quick clean, then sit down to my keyboard, where I stay for about three hours. Then it’s lunch, return emails, phone calls, blog posts, etc. before I make the return trip to pick everyone up. Cappuccino time again! Snacks and homework follow, playing outside or going to various activities, supper, dishes, get everyone ready, tell embarrassing stories about myself and my brothers and sister when we were little, kisses and hugs, and then I sit down to watch something funny on TV. It’s really late now, so I head to bed with my husband, where we both stay up way too late reading. One day, I will go to bed on time and wake up refreshed.

Thanks for having me, Jillian!

Thank YOU, Danette!

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